Dark Poetry #5 |
My Little Angel |
LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Dropped from heaven and down to hell this little angel of mine, she fell twisting and twirling, wings torn apart. Falling right down into my heart, which I'd considered unable to love yet this little angel of mine I'd never thought of. I never knew that there could be something that would care about me, I assumed that I was completely alone but I was wrong, that she's clearly shown for she is ripped and torn just like me, unable to fight, unable to see. This little angel of mine makes me feel like everything is fine, which is why I so dearly love this little angel of mine sent from above. Dedicated to HHC |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
thats amazingg |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Thank you very much, I'm happy you enjoyed it |
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HeliaHeart Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 53Georgia |
Oh this is beautiful! I love imagery and angels and this just brings to mind that feeling of bitterness and relief that follows every human in life... ~Lia |
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rachel_anubis Junior Member
since 2011-03-24
Posts 43 |
I loved the rhythm, story and flow of this poem. It is beautiful. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
Thank you, I'm thrilled that you both enjoyed it! This poem gave me a bit of trouble, so I'm pleased that it turned out well. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
i loved it,... i know it came from your heart and i felt the emotions in it.. thanks for sharing, |
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