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Dark Poetry #5

My Little Angel

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-09-16 10:10 PM

Dropped from heaven and down to hell
this little angel of mine, she fell
twisting and twirling, wings torn apart.
Falling right down into my heart,
which I'd considered unable to love
yet this little angel of mine I'd never thought of.
I never knew that there could be
something that would care about me,
I assumed that I was completely alone
but I was wrong, that she's clearly shown
for she is ripped and torn just like me,
unable to fight, unable to see.
This little angel of mine
makes me feel like everything is fine,
which is why I so dearly love
this little angel of mine sent from above.

Dedicated to HHC

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2011-09-18 03:44 AM

thats amazingg

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

2 posted 2011-09-18 10:58 AM

Thank you very much, I'm happy you enjoyed it

HeliaHeart
Member

since 2008-11-16

Posts 53
Georgia

3 posted 2011-09-28 04:49 PM

Oh this is beautiful! I love imagery and angels and this just brings to mind that feeling of bitterness and relief that follows every human in life...

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

4 posted 2011-09-29 07:53 PM

I loved the rhythm, story and flow of this poem. It is beautiful.

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

5 posted 2011-09-29 09:36 PM

Thank you, I'm thrilled that you both enjoyed it! This poem gave me a bit of trouble, so I'm pleased that it turned out well.

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

6 posted 2011-10-01 02:54 AM

i loved it,... i know it came from your heart and i felt the emotions in it.. thanks for sharing,

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