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Dark Poetry #5
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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
0 posted 2011-07-23 02:56 PM


My breath you take
as a decision is made
rawhide the stone shall meet,
success or death I will greet
The price is right

This time I make green
to where I go
it does seem
as long as the price is paid
dignity gone away


Who shall care?
I am here..
now where shall I go?
Away is all I know
as from there I go


So I met a fragrant guy
his smile slid by my side
knife in the back
lost the sound
The price is right...
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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-08-01 12:57 PM

Confusing, yet beautiful and potent. I think this is a very interesting poem, you can interpret in many ways.
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