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Dark Poetry #5

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WaterWillow
New Member

since 2011-05-04

Posts 4

0 posted 2011-05-23 12:07 PM

An angel fell.

A soulless shell.

No one can hear the broken bell

A demon’s sweet coo,

Heartbreaking and true

As he sings dark lullabies to you.

Fighting off apathy.

Needing an epiphany.

With her demons for company.

Icy fingers grip your soul.

Fear finally taking its toll

Hearts turning black as coal

Snaking through your veins.

Wrapping your heart in chains

Just another horrid game

Fighting fire fades away.

As another heart starts to stray,

Can’t even find the strength to pray.

A rebel’s cry streaks the sky,

Daring to be the one to try,

So Lady Hope does not die.

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

1 posted 2011-05-23 10:37 PM

WOW

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

2 posted 2011-05-25 10:04 PM

Wow. That was amazing. It is like a song.

michellemckee
Junior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 49
Tucson, AZ

3 posted 2011-05-27 07:25 PM

Fantastic!

No postmortem journey is rife
with more mystery than life.
(Kootz)

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

4 posted 2011-06-30 07:54 PM

I love the demon idea. The way the relationship is conveyed.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

5 posted 2011-06-30 09:43 PM

incredible

Haf_Alive
Member

since 2011-09-04

Posts 56
High in the Sky

6 posted 2011-09-04 09:16 PM

i love that.. "souless shell"

sometimes the easiest thing to do is let the darkness stay for a while. very powerful written words. thanks

HAF

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