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Dark Poetry #5

Bloodshed

rachel_anubis
Junior Member

since 2011-03-24

Posts 43

0 posted 2011-05-19 11:38 PM

As I stepped out of the cafeteria,
I saw red,
As I remembered what you did,
For the first time,
I wanted to see,
I wanted to see your blood,
I wanted to feel,
I wanted to feel the hot stickiness,
I wanted to taste,
I wanted to taste the iron,
I wanted hear,
I wanted to hear you scream
As I sat on the steps,
You came up behind me,
I never got to hear your scream,
But you heard mine.

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-05-20 06:48 AM

Full of hate and anger, very well writen. It is a beautiifully dangerous poem, I love it!

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

2 posted 2011-05-20 03:58 PM

i love it

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

3 posted 2011-09-08 01:42 AM

I agree with LaGraceLa

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My pen is the barrel of a gun. Remind me which side you should be on.

lilly
New Member

since 2010-11-06

Posts 4
Under Your Bed

4 posted 2011-09-08 02:41 AM

LOVE IT!

Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant?? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh man....I could be eating a slow learner.

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