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LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

0 posted 2011-01-30 06:55 PM

I don't have anything to write about.
Nothing to tell, nothing to shout. So--
As I sit here, silent with pain,
My words? they die in vain
Never to be heard or understood
Because hearts have turned to blocks of wood
That do not feel and do not bleed
And fear? it's growing like a weed
In the garden that holds my hope
And now I don't know how to cope
With my life that's turned to hell, just
Like the Angel from heaven who fell
Down to earth and wants to go home,
But a life down here she's forced to roam,
Never to be happy, just like me
And we never get to spread out wings,
Or fly free.
So--
As you can see,
I have nothing to tell.
Because...Honestly...?
You have never cared that my life is hell

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-31 11:40 PM

I am made silent by this.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

2 posted 2011-02-01 04:32 PM

Made silent in a good way? Ha ha, I have absolutly no idea if I'm any good at poetry, so any advice or comments are very greatly appreciated.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2011-02-02 05:22 AM

Yes, I'm sorry, silent in a good, and profound way, just having been rapt so deep in the vision and the emotion evoked in my mind by the power of the words and how for me they hit home. I'm speechless.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

4 posted 2011-02-02 07:34 AM

Thank you, that really means alot. It makes me so happy to know that it is good! Thank you.

HopelessRomantic101
Junior Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 10
Georgia, United States of America

5 posted 2011-02-09 09:24 PM

It's amazing. Simply amazing. Deep and profound, and very stirring.

Joshkt
Junior Member

since 2011-02-09

Posts 12

6 posted 2011-02-09 09:37 PM

This kind of reminds me of my poems

I love this so much

keep writing!

~~ Everyone Deserves a Chance ~~

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

7 posted 2011-02-14 06:03 PM

Wow, thank you everybody. It really means alot. I appreciate all of your comments. It can be difficult to write down your raw and vulnerable feeling, much less share them with others, who also happen to be strangers. So thank you, it really really does mean a lot.
I'm flattered and amazed that poets like yourselves are telling me that this poem of mine is good. Thank you, all of you, it means more than you may know.

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

8 posted 2011-04-26 10:18 PM

i loved your poem i usually read most of your poems but i love all of them they are unique in its own way

Haf_Alive
Member

since 2011-09-04

Posts 56
High in the Sky

9 posted 2011-09-04 09:34 PM

i wish i could write like this. you make it seem so easy. and you have so many! and they're all brilliant! so jealous.

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

10 posted 2011-09-08 09:00 PM

haf_alive--
I would like to say that I have read some of your poems and you do write just as well, if not better, then me. I was amazed by your poem constellation prize, it was stunning. Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot.

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