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Wash Away
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Wash Away |
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Joshkt Junior Member
since 2011-02-09
Posts 12 |
Screaming to the sky Wishing I could die Im just a blind man without your love While everyone else is as free as a dove I know theres something above But without your love im lost Now I need to pay the cost I'm not the boss anymore It got tore in two I cant put it back together not even with glue These thoughts too tough to chew Life is like the game clue Didnt know who did what Or what happened too who You thought it was me How I started too bleed you'll never know My mind starts too glow with the satisafaction of washing away the pain. |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
I really liked the way this poem fit together. It was full of emotion and I was quite good. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
There are some really appreciable verses in this poem. I like it alot. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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