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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
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0 posted 2010-12-09 06:48 AM



Blackened fish fry in my cast iron skillet,
seasoned with special secret spices
filling the air with the power of fish fry,
attracting big grizzly bears with sharp teeth
and big claws. even the eagles flew over my fish fry
so alluring and enticing, trout began to jump out of the river and into my
cast iron skillet, one after the other fighting to gain
a hot spot on my skillet ,after a while the river emptied out of trout.
giving courage to tad poles, soon the frogs began to occupy
the river so many that the river turned green and crocked into a dead river.
even the eagles could not resist my fish fry, one by one they
swooped down and in, now my fish fry turned into fried eagle, so many flew down
the skies were emptied of eagles.
The grizzles to fell under the intoxicating fish fry turned fried eagle
forgetting to hibernate for the winter,the grizzles disappeared
with the trout, and the eagles, and the river, and the frogs all gone.
I guess my cooking upset natures balance.

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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
1 posted 2010-12-09 08:54 AM


You must be one hell of a cook Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

pyre
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since 2008-05-16
Posts 136

2 posted 2010-12-10 01:43 AM


wow... that was cool...

Does she pray, or am I prey?  

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