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pyre
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since 2008-05-16
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0 posted 2010-11-30 03:23 PM



I'm back
Its been a while...
Its been too long

My guitar sounds better
The words are raspy
Even with my heart on the strings
Ripping and tearing
And bleeding for you

Its not lubby dub anymore
Its anger, its hurt, but its real
I'm back...

Does she pray, or am I prey?  

© Copyright 2010 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
pyre
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since 2008-05-16
Posts 136

1 posted 2010-12-02 01:42 AM


I forgot something.
mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
Posts 198

2 posted 2010-12-08 03:00 PM


I know when i change my guitar strings it sounds better. thats what i recommend.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2010-12-10 10:16 AM


I remember my brother and his Dobro...and how he callused his fingers on the strings...and how he made his guitar sing...

Thanks for the memory...it's a good one.

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