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Dark Poetry #5
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pyre
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since 2008-05-16
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0 posted 2010-12-08 03:17 PM


Drained
I fell so far apart
This, what was in my heart
I fell so far apart

I began strong
Military nation invincible
Sacrificing for the good of the whole
Until I disappeared

Like a ghost
In a ghost town
The tumble weeds threw me down

Can I rise again?
And regain what’s been taken?

Does she pray, or am I prey?  
© Copyright 2010 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
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1 posted 2011-01-30 07:34 PM

The title for this poem is perfect, and the poem itself is quite wonderful. I really liked it, good job.
pyre
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since 2008-05-16
Posts 136
2 posted 2011-01-31 10:42 PM

Wow... Thank you.

Does she pray, or am I prey?  
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