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I Close My Eyes
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I Close My Eyes |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
Say what you will... The poem below needs a bit of improvement as I'm fighting writers block... ---------------------------------------------- I pray to Jesus... In vain? Dying to my lusts In pain? My heart is so cold I could freeze this way I need that fire To melt my heart so cold Replant the seeds I've never reaped The death of a coward My heart is so cold In Hades I rediscover flames Higher than I've ever imagined I close my eyes Intense the flames that never go away My worm, I puked Forgiveness Red handed A hole in each hand Feet pinned Where is my glory? Where are the promises? Lifted up in praises My woman lies on her back Curled up in a wicker backet With a lead lid You shouted at me to "LIVE!" And I've died inside All your provision fed the fool And I've died inside Does she pray, or am I prey? |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This is very interesting. It is put together well and it is provoking. I loved the word choice, and it is quite good. |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
Hey, Thank you. Does she pray, or am I prey? |
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