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Chavo.wavo
Junior Member
since 2010-11-13
Posts 15


0 posted 2010-12-02 06:21 PM



Forgive my paranoia
My mind is very strange
I think of things most dont think of
i get very insecure
forgive my paranoia
i think sometimes im too weird.
i think it pushes you and others away
i fear things to often
and i can never make it stop
forgive my paranoia
i feel like im annoying
that i dont do things right
that i mess up way to much
and i fear for my well being too
forgive my paranoia
i feel like when i talk romantic it only scars you away
that when your around me i embarrass you
that when im sappy you think its dumb
forgive my paranoia
i already know the cause
consistent sayings that im wrong
that im stupid
that i can do nothing right
forgive my paranoia
but its not my fault
blame family, friends, and ex's
but please do not blame me...

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pyre
Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136

1 posted 2010-12-06 01:11 AM


This is a nice poem... but check your spelling and grammar a little...

Does she pray, or am I prey?  

bigthinker8
Junior Member
since 2010-11-22
Posts 19
Chicago Il
2 posted 2010-12-10 10:37 AM


We can all be a little paranoid. We used to say in high school, paranoia will destroy ya. Clever heh? Enjoyed your poem. Thanks
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