Dark Poetry #5 |
Blood and Stone |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
In half light of the witching hour A son sits all alone Weaves curses to his fathers name And carves it on a stone With his own blood he traces runes That turn as black as oil Digs a hole that's six feet deep And plants it in the soil Far away the hated sire A fortress sleeps within He's turned a sons mother's bed Into a place of sin No grief no shame for what he's wrought For the torment of his son On soiled silk with mistress lies On swift wings Azrael comes The father wakes and rubs his eyes He reaches for his cup As is his wont within the night On ruby wine he sups His face reflects his blackened heart He struggles hard to breath Deep within his body now The warlock's venom seethes Now all can see for themselves The vengeance of the just Six feet down within the ground The stone crumbles to dust On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just excellent! I loved the story, and your rhyme was perfect. Carpe' Diem, |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"Far away the hated sire A fortress sleeps within He's turned a sons mother's bed Into a place of sin No grief no shame for what he's wrought For the torment of his son On soiled silk with mistress lies On swift wings Azrael comes" About time... Good to see someone with a strong poem/rhyme structure man. That was complete fire. Yo bro. hit me up sometime. I have been wanting to do a joint topical poem with someone for awhile now. |
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