Imagery - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #5

Imagery

littlemonster
Junior Member

since 2010-05-06

Posts 39
UK

0 posted 2010-11-06 06:52 AM

I have a wandering thought
sometimes I catch glimpses of
that if I had a semi-automatic
I could figure what was wrong.

Take away the emptyness.

Hold it in my hand
pull the trigger.

Hold it to my head
pull the trigger.

http://littlemonsterscannotbequeen.blogspot.com/

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

1 posted 2010-11-06 12:46 PM

Interesting write....I doubt semi-automatics work against emptiness tho.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-02-01 12:50 PM

Morbid and fascinating. Even believing this isn't about literal suicide it makes it twice chilling and that much more interesting at the realness in the mind play and how the thoughts betray intimate knowledge of the affair. Splendid.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.