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detrix23
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0 posted 2010-10-20 04:17 AM



WWIII

When we first started we were so nice, I knew no one but you said hello.
You got me to smile, while you stole my heart.
Can you tell me when was it we got so nasty?
We were in love but now its WWIII.
I'm now caing a wall of backs,
their whispering fills the air,
they keep glancin in my direction,
I know they're talkin bout me.
Guess its easy to outcast one such as I,
when such sweet lies,
are coming from such charming eyes.

Can you tell me what you said about me?
What happened to the days when we would hold hands?
And a simple text from you could get my heart pounding?
I would bite my lip just thinking about you.
But what this now "Thank god you're not talking to me".
We were in love but now its WWIII.
Acid falls from my eyes.
The reflectionin the miiror shines,
the light of truth in my heart of dark.
With a stab of pain I don't recognize my own face.
What have I become?

What have I done to you?
Our fights intensified.
And you stopped returning my calls.
What did I ever see in a gutless guy like you?
When you broke my arm, you broke my heart.
Looking down at you laying in your grave.
The jail bars may close on me.
But you they'll never find.
We were in love but now its WWIII.

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1 posted 2010-10-22 01:23 AM


interesting piece!
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2 posted 2011-02-01 12:21 PM


This is enormous good writing. Epic subject with a good spin, and well written.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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