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Weeping willow
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since 2010-08-29
Posts 13
Mississippi

0 posted 2010-08-30 05:04 PM



Blackbirds on wings of air,
carry my soul away into the depths of depression.
Picking away at my hearts strings.
Carrying pieces of me away into the deep pool of darkness.
Where no one goes,
I stand alone in the darkness of depressions hold.

Blackbirds sing,
deep dark songs of the night.
Of where I've gone,as a cloud of darkness covers my life.
Leaving me in the silence of the night.
In my darkness I sing a song of sadness.
That's only sung by people who've come across
this madness.

In the night of depressions hold,
my songs are sung very low.
In the accompany of blackbirds,
that carry my soul away.
Into the depths of darkness,
where I stay.
Till the night passes,
releasing my soul from the madness.
Flying pieces of me away into
the light of sadness.

By Weeping willow


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in hyacinth blue
Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 15

1 posted 2010-08-30 06:34 PM


The sadness in this is truly heartfelt. Keep on writing!
FloraScars
Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33
VA, USA
2 posted 2010-12-08 08:26 PM


this is amazing. the sadness is weel described. your a really good writer!
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