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Vorgs
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since 2010-08-05
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0 posted 2010-08-06 06:31 AM


Paths diverged before my eyes,
both as dull as one another.
The brightness ripped off the lights.
The world swirled between black and white.
Muttered sounds beyond the balcony.
I still struggled with my decision.
Vultures circling the azure moon.
Gleaming a shadowy blue.

The shore's corroding screams.
Made me deaf of every second's plight.
Children bustling in the gloomy streets.
Torn teddies and sombre smiles.
Melancholious music plays.
As I listen in entire dismay.
Gravestones laid on every side,
of the splitting intertwines.
Soaked crimson waterfalls cascading to the ground,
still not the wisdom that I wished was found.
Promised of a terrible tomorrow,
with no saviour in sight.

Guess I'll have to wait,
until the peace is found.

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in hyacinth blue
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since 2008-08-27
Posts 15

1 posted 2010-09-01 10:05 AM


A very unique and intricate style of writing.
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