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You Forgot About Me
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You Forgot About Me |
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Vorgs New Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 4 |
There I lay, comfortably on my broken bed, waiting for your return. My dear, where are you? Without you, I've become a vexed void. Pessimism gripped onto an endless eternity. I honestly hate having you in my mind. You don't take notice of my silent screams. There I sat, looking out at the dreamy daylight. My dear, where are you? I feel brutally betrayed, by the scathing and scarring promises not kept. But you don't care, for it was all contrived. And I don't care, for it was all a craving. There I lay, screaming in the sheets, waiting for your return. My dear, where are you? Torturous taunts echoing in my head. I want to believe, that I made no mistake. Even so, despite of the arduous night, I still await you, to return into my sight. There I sat, looking out at the distorted delusion. My dear, where are you? The bitterness and betrayal consumes my soul. And yet, the sunlight still resumes. Even so, despite of the cruel day, I continue to wait and be led astray. My dear where are you? I can't construe. I am numb. I am nothing. I am nobody. If only you could see, for it was all because...... You Forgot About Me. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Welcome, Vorgs, to the Passions in Poetry forums. Good first post! Though I cannot help but wonder how comfortable the author here can really be, given the difficult-to-endure emotions expressed. |
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Vorgs New Member
since 2010-08-05
Posts 4 |
Hi, I show my immense gratitude for the warm welcome. Hope you are not too concerned, as I am certain I have found a homely residence to showcase and to receive critique for my poems. I am very inexperienced at the moment, as I've just started and this was my first poem. |
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