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jennywren
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since 2010-08-03
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uk

0 posted 2010-08-03 02:53 PM



The very deepest part of me,
Is hidden from the sight you see,
I've tried so hard to lift the latch,
Undo the door release the catch,
To enter into that place unknown
Where all my fears and demons roam,
To face that part of me unseen,
That place to which I've seldom been.

If I could for a second glance,
Peer through the glass and take a chance,
Would I like what I would see,
This person who is really me,
Who felt alone out on a limb,
Oh all this time where has she been,
Would she still be the girl she was,
Who looked so sad and somewhat cross.

Who welcomed death's embrace in part,
Felt deep within her broken heart,
When all her dreams smashed to the ground,
A million pieces scattered round.

when in deep water become a diver

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easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-08-04 01:14 AM


Interesting - yet I can see you are already armored against the worst of terror!

Welcome to these forums, btw.

jennywren
Junior Member
since 2010-08-03
Posts 12
uk
2 posted 2010-08-04 05:08 AM


Thank you so much for your thoughts on this much appreciated. Thanks for the friendly welcome I am very happy to be here, looking forward to reading lots of poems. regards jennywren.

when in deep water become a diver

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