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Dark Poetry #5
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loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11
Posts 48
0 posted 2010-07-25 11:34 PM

i have a hole in my heart,
i have a hole in my soul,
a hole in my vision a hole in my world,
do you happen to know how to mend a broken heart?
do you know how to fix me?
because i don't..
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-07-26 07:32 AM

You are depressed now, but things will get better. I daresay it, and I mean it. Hope springs eternal, even in the old folks who really are getting a little bit more physically decrepit already.

And I am one who recognizes a good sulk when I see or perform it. Best wishes to the autheor!
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