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RC Langill
Member

since 2008-03-09

Posts 104

0 posted 2010-06-21 08:02 PM

Lost Song

A day will be arriving,
An ordinary dawn,
When someone who would notice
Will find that I am gone
And ponder for a moment
How simply life goes on.
Amid the clang and clutter,
Notes have faded from a song.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2010-06-27 01:42 AM

Wow. This is short but very powerful. I'm quite impressed by the boldness of your words. I'll definitely add this to my library.

Lovely write,

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

2 posted 2010-07-09 08:28 PM

That's gorgeous in its simplicity.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

Pixie Wales
Junior Member

since 2010-07-29

Posts 21
UK

3 posted 2010-07-31 06:03 AM

I agree with the other two comments that you have received:

Beutifully simple and exceptionally powerful. Wow!

LR
New Member

since 2010-08-18

Posts 4
United Kingdom

4 posted 2010-08-19 07:12 AM

Less is definately more in this write
its it simplicity that makes it so punchy

Nicely done

Novus_Os
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 115
West Coast, USA

5 posted 2010-08-19 08:57 PM

Good job. Could even be expanded, but works very well as is.

Regards,

Novus_Os

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

Yuka
Member

since 2010-08-19

Posts 71
china

6 posted 2010-08-20 09:19 AM

wow, good write.

Yuka Chan

Weeping willow
Junior Member

since 2010-08-29

Posts 13
Mississippi

7 posted 2010-08-30 05:07 PM

Such a simple poem,but yet it says so much,
within the heart of yours, you've sung.Nice write

Swisha
Junior Member

since 2009-07-22

Posts 32

8 posted 2010-09-01 11:03 PM

Wish I could post something that short and meaningful! I feel it takes me much longer. Nicely done

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

9 posted 2010-09-13 08:18 AM

Beautiful

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