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Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
Posts 177
Alabama

0 posted 2010-06-21 04:29 PM




A dance between the dark elf and the faerie-
a dance of pursuit and flight.
She shimmers from leaf to leaf, twirling and flitting higher and higher, hoping to reach the sunlight before he reaches her.
He follows, moving smoothly and secretively, sliding from shadow to shadow, lusting for her flesh and slowly getting closer.
Who will win this race?

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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
1 posted 2010-06-21 04:39 PM


Oh, this is cool...I want it to continue.

It's kind of sensual to me too.

VelvetVampress
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since 2010-04-24
Posts 26

2 posted 2010-06-21 11:59 PM


i agree i would love to hear more

~Velvet Vampress~

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