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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2010-06-18 08:19 PM


Everything is getting really bad
It feels like I'm going to choke

Theres things I guess I must say to you
And unfortunately its no joke

You know I care about you
And you mean everything to me

Guess its just hard for you
Theres things you don't see

I want you to stay
I don't want you to go
But it seems to be the only way
That other people want you to know

Its explained like this
Because of you and me
Not being the right way
They want to see
Seems like everyone wants you to leave

Because of another girl
The way you feel about her
I deal with it
Yet they say that it hurts

I try and try again to tell them
What it'd be like if you leave
Guess they don't understand?
They don't see how much you mean to me

The things that you say
And the things that you do
Its like I'm waiting for so long
Not once believed from you

I want you to stay
I don't want you to go
Theres still things for me to tell you
Many things you should know

Thank you for everything
You mean everything to me
The words you spoke
The expressions from your face

It seems to be that you're what I always wanted
Yet I'm far from having you
But thats okay, because I know
I'd rather have you in my life
Than to not have you here at all

I want you to stay
I don't want you to go
Theres so many emotions
Things I've never shown

I'm not sure if you quite understand
How you affect my life so much
Even the simplest thing as touching my hand
Letting me know that you're there
I've always had you know that I care

However things are different
Things will never be the same
Of course this hurts so much
Sometimes I feel I'm to blame

And as I try so hard not to cry tears
Its impossible to hole them back from you
And from everyone else who knows who I am

I want you to stay
I don't want you to
You mean everything to me
Can't describe how much I love you so

My best friend
My little brother
My everything

I'm really going to miss you
This brings nothing more than pain

You're beautiful brown eyes
Short brown hair
Your lips being so small
Yet the smallest part of your body

While everything else seems to be bigger than ever
Your muscles
Your strength
Your words
And your heart

As I cry another tear trying to finish what I write
I want you to stay
Never want you to go
Please forgive me
As I care so much for you
Love you with all my heart so

Kate

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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2010-06-18 08:21 PM


I really don't want my best friend to leave, but from everyone elses point of view, because of money problems, it seems thats what everyone has to do, he doesn't mean to make me cry, usually he's always there for me, but yet, if he has to go I'm going to miss him, Joshua Eric John McFee

Kate

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
2 posted 2010-06-19 09:09 AM


An obviously heartfelt write, and a good read. What can one say except best wishes and hope things turn out good.
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
3 posted 2010-06-20 05:02 PM


thanks! I know it hards, its about my best friend/ little-big brother! I loved it!

Kate

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