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loveyourself102
Junior Member
since 2009-10-11
Posts 48


0 posted 2010-05-31 11:58 PM


his eyes are gray.
endless,
deeper than the ocean,
more mysterious than time itself.
when he speaks his words flow through my
body like waves of love
my tears from years past come flooding back,
my soul reborn from just one look in my direction
he takes my breath and locks it away,
he is my
DEATH
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THOUGHTS:
you see this was meant to be sort of ironic, like you love someone but they don't love you back, so they kill you inside while making everything better, love is a tricky buisness never to be takein lightly
but while some avoid it at all costs others search their who lives for it, and others, the lucky ones have love find them, i may be young but i understand a lot, i myself  used to steer clear of it after my heart break and will be posting poetry from it, but now i am going on with life sometimes searching sometimes letting it find me, but i don't think i'll find my soulmate any time soon.

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easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-06-02 05:52 AM


You aren't kidding that trying to love- which requires trust - can be risky.

Not loving is ultimately significantly more risky, though. Lack of loving can lead to some very screwed-up behavior and rationalizations, as history in general has proved. It is not a good thing, being screwed up like that, and for more reasons than are commonly supposed...

Keep writing and composing, please. You have a budding talent for this.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2010-06-02 07:53 AM


I've said that often but for different reasons.

M

voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
3 posted 2010-06-10 01:34 AM


this is great I relate to it so much!! I understand what it like!! Been going throug h it for a few months now and it sucks!! hope things get better!

Kate

VelvetVampress
Junior Member
since 2010-04-24
Posts 26

4 posted 2010-06-22 12:03 PM


i relate to this completely! i love the poem and i thank you for the share.
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