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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
Posts 96


0 posted 2010-04-25 12:11 PM



A light hides him, tonight;
too cold the light, grievous eyes;
the pain - too fast;  be killed
the wound of a scribble, a cry, a tear  -  -
dead myth.

the golden fell from his face;
blood filled with red moan, sea and shun;
smiling  -  dead , chosen.

hot face -- dead sun;
his smile spun in hung light;
a cold ache -  a sad man walked
this very night;

drops him into devil deafness;
so innocently -  he was strangled.


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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-05-28 09:29 PM


Impressive, as are the other two from this trio of posts. Personally I like "river scarecrow" best, but there is no accounting for taste.
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