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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
A light hides him, tonight; too cold the light, grievous eyes; the pain - too fast; be killed the wound of a scribble, a cry, a tear - - dead myth. the golden fell from his face; blood filled with red moan, sea and shun; smiling - dead , chosen. hot face -- dead sun; his smile spun in hung light; a cold ache - a sad man walked this very night; drops him into devil deafness; so innocently - he was strangled. http://poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Impressive, as are the other two from this trio of posts. Personally I like "river scarecrow" best, but there is no accounting for taste. |
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