Dark Poetry #5 |
Silent Screams Echo |
XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Silent Screams echo, piercing the night air. Darkness falls, remembering the day. Who is it that remembers, which one of the dark angels? Who is it that is here, which one of them will take me; take me with them? Surrender dark clouds, remember the days you don't exist. Shoot down the banner, and release your army of hatred. Who is the culprit? who brought me here? I have forgotten, remind me of that night. Who remembers the ones that don't exist? Who can tell me what I've become? {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle {~~*~~} |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
great poem. midnightdreamer She past you, but doesn't notice you. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank you, i appreciate you reading it. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
^_^ i know what you mean |
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prize Member
since 2008-11-21
Posts 116 |
Hi there, I love this poem and I especially loved reading the stanza: Surrender dark clouds, remember the days you don't exist. Shoot down the banner, and release your army of hatred. Awesome lines with vivid imagery! |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"Surrender dark clouds, remember the days you don't exist. Shoot down the banner, and release your army of hatred." Nice. Havent read many poems by yeah. But if you keep dropping that stuff man I will keep tuning in. Very nice. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank you, im glad to hear that you liked it. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Geez Emily!!! Is there ever a time that you write a crappy poem? Apparently not. lol. Great poem hun! -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Wow. I'm new to this site, but when I saw this poem I knew I'd come to the right place. Beautiful poem XxForever.BrokenxX On the seashore I espy the dreadful void under the tides |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank you, and welcome to pip. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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angelfacegurl Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67Swartz Creek, MI |
hey emily nice poem by the way! i would like to talk to you sometime soon girly... bri |
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