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lost dog New Member
since 2009-12-01
Posts 3 |
This mental torment is killing me from the inside out theres no screaming I refuse to shout, theres no tears falling from my eyes Im holding those back. Im a master of my own disguise! Why is it when we're finally on the right path, obsticals derail us throwing life off track. Im barely holding on by a thread, like a thong in a fat girls crack dividing the line between life is good and life is crap! What did I do in my past, what did I do wrong? Im trying to keep my strength, but I dont know if Im that strong! Two wrongs dont make a right, but obviousily two rights can make a wrong! I believe in lust at first, in my heart you'll always belong Maybe its the city in which I live the place that I reside, the city they call Sin where the devil likes to hide. The place that I call home, millions of people yet Im all alone. Is this the path of disfunction or a case of self destruction? What lead me to this life Im in? I can see him now....... the Devil standing there with a grin! Is it time to move on, move out, move up Im at the lowest Ive ever been the alcohol overflows my cup. Where do I go from this point on? Trying to do right, but it all seems wrong Where do I fit in where do I belong ? I ask my best friend , but his answers taking too long! He looks at me in disgust, the one I thought I could trust. My best friend for as long as I could remember, since Oct 73' Janurary through December. I loved you more then anyone else I ever have. As I look at you now with disgust behind my eyes, I dont love you anymore. Why are you so surprised. Its time to leave this friend of Old, as I walk from in front of the mirror its time for me to go!!! [This message has been edited by lost dog (03-09-2010 01:23 AM).] |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow this was a strong piece. But I had to laugh at the fat girl part. Lol. Nice write. -Zach Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters. |
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