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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
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0 posted 2010-02-22 11:59 AM


thinking about you makes me sick.
thinking about you makes me cry.
thinking about you makes me hate myself for letting you do what you did.
i should of been smarter.
i should of seen better.
i should of understood what was going on before i got so sunk in.
we hurt each other, and we cant take it back.
we cant fix it.
what happened was painful, we didn't care.
we were selfish.
i have your guitar.
you have my clothes.
it will never change.
i need to accept that.
even after all this time, i have a sick thought in my head.
it will leave, just like you.
never coming back, just like you.
i don't care, i cant care.
it almost killed me.
not again.
I'm better, I'm stronger, i am different, i am beautiful, i am passionate, i can do
anything.
i learned all this the hard way.
because of you.
i learned to be ok with myself.
i will overcome.
there is no more you.
you do not exist.
we never did.
our memories vanished with every passing day of hurt and pain.
we cant fix it.
we cant go back.
we dont care.
can i have my clothes?
come get your guitar.

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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
1 posted 2010-02-23 08:56 AM


Painful and raw, this introspection of a relationship gone wrong.
Nice.

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