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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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0 posted 2010-02-07 08:52 PM


I think about the ocean

And how every wave has a distinct pattern

I hear the music as I look deeper

The sunset slowly coming to an end

As I myself, feel coming to an end

A whisper beside me telling me to hold on

However feel my life almost gone

The wind all around me

The things that I see

The last of my dreams

To be a secret, never found

The longing cries of children once more

At last going down, beyond the shore

A movie that reminds you deep within

Lives that were torn, no more sins

The end is near it's almost here

At last my dreams, in no more fear

To hear your voice just one more time

As I loved you my whole life

I now say goodbye

A few days or years it doesn't matter

I'll always remember you

So never forget

The things we've done, and never regret

As I get one more glance to look at you

Everything gone the things we've been through

To wait to see you again in my life

Waiting and waiting, still the same tonight

And now as I grow old the same story lies

As I tell it once more tears fall from my eyes

Yes I loved you, always been

Still waiting for my day, when I'll see you again

Kate

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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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New York
1 posted 2010-02-07 08:52 PM


wrote it randomly in about 5 minutes
so it's straight from the heart hope you like??

Kate

Desirer4New
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2 posted 2010-02-15 03:25 PM


I do that too, just sit down and write something great out in a couple min. This is really geat, very beautiful, favorite line "At last my dreams, in no more fear
To hear your voice just one more time
As I loved you my whole life
I now say goodbye
A few days or years it doesn't matter
I'll always remember you". Again very good & Thanks for sharing.

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
3 posted 2010-02-20 03:07 PM


thank you for the comment!

Kate

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