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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2009-12-16 03:25 PM


Love

Meet me on the other side,
I still don’t know what love is,
Am I still tough enough,
Spare me all your lies,
I can’t take them anymore,
Don’t know why,
You give me all this pain,
I want to see you cry,
Fight me to gain,
Fight me to lose,
Taint me with the pain,
And meet me on the other side.


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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
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1 posted 2010-02-18 12:38 PM


Thats really beautiful
Desirer4New
Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art
2 posted 2010-02-18 12:38 PM


Thats really Beautiful.
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
3 posted 2010-02-19 10:51 AM


I like the "meet me on the other side", and how you closed with it like you opened it.

Good stuff.

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