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Swisha
Junior Member

since 2009-07-22

Posts 32

0 posted 2010-01-27 12:29 PM

The rain is loud on the window when it taps
Keeping me depressed inside, workin on my raps
Rain clouds follow me around, driving me absurd
Saying it's gonna get better, not hearing a word
My smile is forced, acting like emotions are evil
My style is warped, like showing love is illegal
Distance myself from others, save me from the untrue
Sometimes I put up walls, to see who breaks through

Waiting for good news to show up, I'm losing control
Rain is taking a toll on my mind and body, spirit and soul
I fake happiness and hide pain, I smile and joke
That helps me keep composure around my folk
Wake up and see that darkness has come today
Say goodbye to hope and happiness, it's run away
Lookin for heaven, off in all the wrong places
I've given up and don't expect many sad faces

Put whiskey in my cup, my problems begin to drown
Soon as the buzz leaves, problems come back around
My ill feelings keep adding up, to be alone I prefer
Old counselors steady calling, But i'm avoiding her
They say what doesn't kill you makes you stronger
You'd have to be superman, to lift as much as me partner
When the bad weather comes to rain down on my parade
Just raise up my umbrella and wait for the storm to fade

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

1 posted 2010-01-30 01:19 PM

This is a nice piece. Do enjoy it as really feel the emotions from it. Look forward to more from you

CrEaTuRe aka JazVina Lahre

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

2 posted 2010-02-02 12:24 PM

Hey swisha. nice drop man.
long time no see

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-03-14 06:46 AM

I like this - it sounds like music and the feelings are real.

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