Dark Poetry #5 |
Frozen Cold... |
CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Emptyness is all that is inside me No love left to give anyone at all My past is just glimmer of what once was My heart is frozen cold all black and blue From all the hurt and disappointment It has had to deal with all these years My soul no longer seeks companionship It seeks nothing more than to be alone... My mind no longer tries to figure out It just accepts the reality of my emotions See my emotions are my only weakness I am one who loves with all of herself Never knowing how to save something For me just in case it does not work out Or if I am not loved in return by another The chance was taken knowing well the result So I gave till it broke me inside and out Then I end up empty and alone Why even bother at all of love When it is just a dream for meFroz To be indulged through poetry and fantasy I am safe from harm without love in my life No stress no argueing no forced changes for me No pretending to be someone else then me Just me taking care of me and mine that is it Love needs trust openess understanding to live None of which will I take the chance and share Frozen and cold thats just me. Frozen, Jazvina Lahre Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
I love this. I can relate perfectly to it. Good job. library. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Thanks so much XxForever.BrokenxX it's been a long time since i wrote anything on PiP just hope in gettin some feedbacks as aint sure if i'm any good at writing anymore... CrEaTuRe aka JazViNa Lahre Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
well you can stop worrying 'cause this is wonderful. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Thanks so much u really made my day |
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