Summer's Gone With Your Love

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Dark Poetry #5

Summer's Gone With Your Love

Mr Naz
Junior Member

since 2009-10-22

Posts 29
London United Kingdom

0 posted 2009-10-27 04:54 AM

The Autumn month is forlorn,
Like my heart with forceful wind,
Summer’s gone, winter unborn,
As our love has gone –rescind,
Time ahead does sly wait
In shadows gloom and dark,
Cold and stark is my fate
Your love away you did take.

loveyourself102
Junior Member

since 2009-10-11

Posts 48

1 posted 2009-10-27 08:54 PM

mr. naz my best guy friend says i shuld just get over the jerk that dumped me but i cant help it you know it still hurts so bad and im glad to know im not the only one who is still hurting!!!

Mr Naz
Junior Member

since 2009-10-22

Posts 29
London United Kingdom

2 posted 2009-10-28 05:20 AM

Hi loveyourself, people have said to me similar things, but I loved her dearly for eighteen years, as I beleived she did me for the majority of that time, so i have reflected on what others have said and those that say "get over it, it'll pass, pull yourself together, get on with life" and such, - I feel they have never experienced such love.!!!!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2010-01-29 02:26 AM

Reminds me of a Keats poem...some of the old English poets...

~loved it~

~ARH

Desirer4New
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
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4 posted 2010-02-09 04:08 PM

loveyourself i got told the same thing...but it is soo hard

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