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Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2009-11-26 05:57 PM

Mama, I don’t wanna see no more
Don’t wanna feel the earth no more!
Torn apart, torn into two
feelings ablaze, but I still feel for you
Born as one of the night breed
I'm a poetic gladiator...
That attacks quicker then light speed
My heart rate escalates
I lie in wait as my body hydrates
aint no tomb I won’t desecrate
Couldn’t be by her side as an inmate

Just want to see my Kin in college
Just want to see her defy
the suppression of knowledge
My esophagus screams apocalypse
Storming the land by airships
under the suns eclipse reading the demonic transcripts
I'd be in a cage still,
if they could lock me in one!
I poke fun as my past deeds are undone,
I conquered my personal estate
like Alexander the great
due to the fact the unemployment rate
rises slightly higher than the inflation rate.

My hammer aint hollow.
Ill strike you like the God Apollo
I hate the labels society feels free to shot like arrows
I bestow Words in sequence against the grain
I'm on the streets seeking the seventh seal
disregarding the pain,
Standing over charred remains
my mid section contorts
but not one tear in the courts
what’s breed in the bone
can’t be undone in the flesh.
religion and fiction,
a realistic topical compilation
facing the audience from TV to radio stations
lying before the judge sentences,
while smashing a fix, smashing crucifixes,
lifting higher then Jesus’ Crucifixion.
Heaven and hell, the bell tolls
Souls control the dead sea scrolls,
Wild fire like voodoo from Creoles

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

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since 2009-11-27
Posts 159
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1 posted 2009-12-07 05:28 AM

Poses a lot to think about.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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2 posted 2009-12-07 09:32 AM

wow... this was well great... i cant describe how i feel about it
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3 posted 2010-01-16 04:17 PM

I loved it.....
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4 posted 2010-02-15 09:36 PM

Very interesting mixture of mythology and apocolyptic symbolism! I really like this line:

"My hammer aint hollow.
Ill strike you like the God Apollo"

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