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Dark Poetry #5

Creation of the Human

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2009-01-09 10:58 AM

creations of the "HUMAN"
MAN are biggest threat
or is it GOD himself?
the power to be us
control us
or meybe we fear our own minds
thoughts,passions,visions
we become a victim to our own addictions
we become a game to the world
we become affraid
of what?

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

1 posted 2009-03-18 12:39 PM

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Brittany

nina1522
Member

since 2009-02-14

Posts 189

2 posted 2009-03-26 09:57 PM

just give it time and people will comment. maybe try commenting on other poems before you ask for people to comment yours. just be patient and some one will. i would but i just dont have anythin g to say execpt that.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2009-08-10 07:34 AM

I liked it Britt. Asked these questions myself a time or two. Long time no see

·´~`·»Brett«·´~`·

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