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Dark Poetry #5

Promise to Mystique

ShadowOfLies
Junior Member

since 2009-06-21

Posts 13

0 posted 2009-08-09 07:51 AM

Not yet grown
But fully matured
You opened my eyes
And made me believe
To walk on the edge
Could be for the better
Slipping on ridges
Only to be pulled back
By the hands of an angel
It might not be perfect
But is disfunctionally worth it
This grip you inflicted
Unknown to the serpent
Will pull it together
And fulfill in my promise...

Brian

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

1 posted 2009-08-09 04:37 PM

Yo. I really like this.
Sic. I like the images and structure you used here. For such a small poem. It is pretty sweet.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

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