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Dark Poetry #5

Nature, Love, Alone

lol@megan
New Member

since 2009-06-11

Posts 7

0 posted 2009-06-11 11:54 PM

(its a little rough, and i am new to this website, first draft kinda thing, no title)

Now with you gone, i can feel the warm summer breeze in my hair.
This sun on my shoulders lets me know that you are gone,
but the gray clouds in the sky say its not for long.
Thunderstorms coming in, now this has got to be what is fair.
If i could feel the clouds, they would feel like my skin touching yours.

But what i miss the most is the shadows of you around this house.
All your things are gone now, but your smell still lingers on my pillow case.
When I close my eyes I can see you sleeping on this very pillowcase, and i woke up that morning to see the sun shining in your hair.

Now this house is empty all your things are gone, and im all alone.
But now i can feel the arm summer breeze in my hair, and the sun on my shoulders.
Only thing is im starting to wonder, if this going to matter.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2009-06-11 11:59 PM

tht was really good megan!

midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2009-08-10 07:37 AM

Loved the concluding line an how it smacks you in the eye.

·´~`·»Brett«·´~`·

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