Dark Poetry #5 |
My Black Symphony |
XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
-short little thing. Not my greatest but im happy with it. Will you remember? Will it always be? When the world goes dark, will you think of me? Stuck down in this well, I'll live my worst dream. Alive forever, It's not all it seems. Can you hear that sobbing? It comes from below. I can hear her screaming, oh please, let me go. I wont tell the world, your secret's safe with me. No one will discover that I don't live for me. This world is my Black Symphony. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange {~~*~~} I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs.. |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
i thought this was amazing! great write |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
thank you! im happy to hear it. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
amazing loved it! it was heart touching.made me think for sure. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Wow Really, really, really amazing. Library it is... :p 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' [This message has been edited by Stitches (12-02-2009 07:06 PM).] |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank you, I appreciate your support. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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QuietAstronomer Junior Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 18North Carolina, USA |
Splendid. Descriptive of where many go, few return. QA |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
i enjoyed it alot. it touched me.well written.very well done. |
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Father Member
since 2009-12-15
Posts 58Confusion |
Very well done indeed! |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Thank you all. I appreciate your comments a lot. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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