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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-11-12 09:50 PM

-short little thing. Not my greatest but im happy with it.
Will you remember?
Will it always be?
When the world goes dark,
will you think of me?
Stuck down in this well,
I'll live my worst dream.
Alive forever,
It's not all it seems.

Can you hear that sobbing?
It comes from below.
I can hear her screaming,
oh please, let me go.
I wont tell the world,
your secret's safe with me.
No one will discover that I don't live for me.

This world is my Black Symphony.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

wolfy09
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 93

1 posted 2009-11-12 10:07 PM

i thought this was amazing! great write

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-11-12 10:46 PM

thank you! im happy to hear it.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

3 posted 2009-12-02 02:24 PM

amazing loved it! it was heart touching.made me think for sure.

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

4 posted 2009-12-02 06:15 PM

Wow

Really, really, really amazing.

Library it is... :p

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

[This message has been edited by Stitches (12-02-2009 07:06 PM).]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2009-12-12 09:01 PM

Thank you, I appreciate your support.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

QuietAstronomer
Junior Member

since 2009-12-13

Posts 18
North Carolina, USA

6 posted 2009-12-13 09:54 PM

Splendid.
Descriptive of where many go, few return.
QA

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

7 posted 2009-12-15 03:46 PM

i enjoyed it alot. it touched me.well written.very well done.

Father
Member

since 2009-12-15

Posts 58
Confusion

8 posted 2009-12-15 07:52 PM

Very well done indeed!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

9 posted 2009-12-17 11:26 PM

Thank you all. I appreciate your comments a lot.

{~~*~~}

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

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