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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2009-12-13 12:39 PM



Things seem to be moving fast

And I only stay still and go nowhere

Always the same things happen nothing new

Voices all around tell me what to do and where to go

As time goes on nothing gets better only worse

I can't say anything, if I do it's wrong

I can't look somewhere, I'll be looking at the wrong thing

I can't walk in a straight line or zig zag, it'll be wrong

I can't do anything without there being questions asked, I'll be wrong

I can try to do something right for a change and try to please you, again I'll be wrong

I'll wait for you to come home and stay waiting all day, and I'll be wrong, because I didn't wait the right way

I'll wait til you're away to cry and as the tears falls, questions appear in my head, my answers will be wrong

I'll try to think of my best friend and how much I miss him, think that were going to stay friends

Only to find out again, I'll be wrong

To think that my family would be a real family again would bring me hope

Of course, I'll be wrong once more

So why do I keep trying when it seems I'm never good enough?

Not good enough for you, my friends, family even me?

What's the point of any of this if all it is,is your way or nothing at all ?

I mean I thought I at least had a choice?

Well Iguess I'm wrong about that too

Kate

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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2009-12-13 12:39 PM


Sort of what I'm really going through and how I see it

Kate

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2009-12-13 04:24 PM


thats how i see it playing out in my family... your not alone.


voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
3 posted 2009-12-16 03:28 AM


thanks but technically it's about my b/f and me because everyone likes him and has a liking to him way more than me and of course I'm extremely jealous and a lot of times I try to do stuff for him  or any one else and I'm always wrong about what I do or say?  

Kate

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2009-12-16 05:46 PM


Kate, you need to please yourself and not try so hard to please others...


Do things that make you feel good and  make you happy...then others will see that in you.

M



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