»
Main Forums
»
Dark Poetry #5
»
What you choose
| Dark Poetry #5 |
|
What you choose |
|
|
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Don't judge me I'll say whatever I want Yes you have your own opinion But if it's not good then I rather you keep it to yourself Excuse me is my life your business? I didn't think so However your reading this right? For something to read, enjoy a great poem! Well of course and I'll tell you something I have been writing poems for the past 10 years I'm sure I have plenty of experience by now It's your opinion on what you think of what I write I, however believe I am a great poet!! Tell me this if you may Have you ever read one of your own poems and cried? Not realizing of course it would make you cry Until reading it a few years later Have you written about your heart ? And how someone threw it away? Or maybe the time your own parents chose someone else? Someone else over there own child? How about the time when furniture was more important Than your child's education? Never thought of that just yet right? How about being accused of hurting your own sibling? Yes that's happened too Maybe you'll think about when grandmother passed away You didn't realize it til she was gone how much she meant to you Did you ever think about your father? That he'd rather have sex and pleasure, Than pay attention or even help his child? There's also that time when your mother "Didn't love you or care about you" Then later you find out it was a lie That the one who told you that, They were the one's that really felt that way How does it feel when your family has all left you They never call or send mail You always call them to see how they are Isn't that a parent's job too? There's also when your girlfriend accused your daughter Of having sex at the time when she really wasn't And because that was said She went out and did it anyway, not caring about her It's none of her business what goes on in my life She's nothing to me She's your stupid housewife So I guess you've finally chosen what side your on Don't bother trying to make me feel better now I was always lost,mean and horrible in your eyes And you know what, now I'm gone that's no surprise Don't worry about me anymore You never have anyway Just pretend I'm not here Was never there and you really had nothing to say Don't be shocked that I speak the truth You won that thing, and me, you lose Kate |
||
| © Copyright 2009 Kate - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I love my poem and yes it is from the heart and pretty much all true Kate |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kate this is a very powerful poem... You say you would accept critiques and for those of us who wish to, to respond and speak our minds but I won't, since at times we can misinterpret what another's thoughts are. But I will again say your poem was packed with hurt and it was felt. M |
||
|
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
um thanks for that but really it's about my dad and his girlfriend and me, and how I pretty much don't belong, but that's a great way of your own interpretation thanks! Kate |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
