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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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From the start Lost so far Elusive dark Conceals where you are Never mattered This unknown path Where feelings scattered Into oblivion's wrath Consign to surrender Blackness calls Defenseless does render Cataclysmic fall... c2009 vduna Inspired-8 |
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LaGraceLa Member
since 2011-01-30
Posts 243Minnesota, USA |
This is good. It has real emotion. Good job. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
A well penned rendition of this feeling. We all have our preferences, and I am no fan of such surrender, but it doesn't spoil this writing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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