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Dark Poetry #5
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
0 posted 2009-01-03 10:58 PM

A congregation growing larger
As you take the stage
Confuse the sane
Too many obstacles in their way
Trapped inside your words
(or should I say your lies)
I can't believe I ever called you

'friend'

January 3rd 2009
Emily Shives
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LaGraceLa
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since 2011-01-30
Posts 243
Minnesota, USA
1 posted 2011-02-13 10:01 AM

I know that feeling. Of having a 'friend' that was never really what you thought. You wrote the emotions perfectly. Great job.
FloraScars
Junior Member
since 2010-11-08
Posts 33
VA, USA
2 posted 2011-03-10 03:56 PM

i love how you worded this poem. i couldn't have formed the words any better than you did.
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2011-03-24 05:29 PM

And here everyone thought that you were just a simple waitress. How wrong they were!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"
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