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Dark Poetry #5

Welles to Hearst

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-11-19 08:31 AM

I've played Welles to Hearst
again. The Oscar parties
drone insipidly.

Outside, on the darkened hills,
oh how thirsty they will be!

LaGraceLa
Member

since 2011-01-30

Posts 243
Minnesota, USA

1 posted 2011-02-27 01:58 PM

I don't really get it but it most defiantly has some hidden meaning, and it can be interpreted in a lot of different ways. Maybe write with a more clear message or emotion, because I think that helps. Good job.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2011-03-24 05:12 PM

It does require some sorting out, doesn't it? But it certainly is a clever write.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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