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athousandstars
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since 2009-10-02
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0 posted 2009-10-03 12:01 PM



the sun slips behind the mountains so tall
proof that even the strongest can fall
as the light slowly disappears
I wonder why we cry so many tears
for things that never really mattered
we leave ourselves bruised and battered
constantly fighting the darkness
wishing it could be painless
but we're never going to win this
no longer will we feel that bliss
out of control, we stumble
as the sky begins to crumble
gone is that glimmer of hope
no way to even try and cope
with this souless night
such an agonizing, usless fight

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ShadowOfLies
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since 2009-06-21
Posts 13

1 posted 2009-10-04 05:18 PM


Very good first write... Welcome to Piptalk.

Wouldn't say our fight is entirely pointless, seeing that the sun has to rise again sometime...

Brian

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