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Dark Poetry #5
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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
0 posted 2009-09-15 07:43 PM


To let you in…
And surrender my heart…..

…….I let you play games.
To have your fun….
………
Was hurt

To think I had mattered
To someone
………And have them
Throw me away……
………
Was pure pain.
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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1 posted 2009-09-18 03:20 PM

That hit the spot
Def-init
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since 2008-12-03
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Toronto, Canada
2 posted 2009-09-19 09:14 AM

Wonderful.
That was a neat little poem. I liked the structure

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
3 posted 2009-12-13 04:39 PM

sorry...


thank you
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