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Dark Poetry #5

Black Star

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

0 posted 2009-02-02 10:03 PM

“So high and mighty you are,
Look upon the brilliant star!
See the glow it gives,
It’s proud of what it is!”

Look upon the brilliant star
I know what you really are.

“You’re the brightest in your group,
Your life is ribbons and bows!
So peaceful and high
They say you own the sky!”

Look upon the brilliant star
I know what you really are.

“You’re the bow, we’re the arrows.
We fire at your will”

No point in hiding it
Don’t throw a fit
You’re the bow and we’re the arrows
So what’s the scar in your heart?

“When night comes round
You take flight
You’re the brightest in the night”

When dawn comes you go down with a frown
All it took was just one arrow
It’s not much
But it destroyed you
Turned you into this
Now all you want is attention
It makes you feel supreme
Allows you to forget the arrow
That struck your star
And left you a scar
It destroyed your heart
Now your story is tart

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

lol@megan
New Member

since 2009-06-11

Posts 7

1 posted 2009-06-11 11:31 PM

This poem is wonderful, makes me think about things. I love it, you are a great writer.

Teri
Junior Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 13
Adelaide, Australia

2 posted 2009-06-15 07:10 AM

to me this could be about alot of different things and i love that. great writing style im going to go read your other poems now :P

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

3 posted 2009-07-05 02:20 PM

thanks i suppose.

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2009-12-13 04:49 PM

i believe that was the point of this poem but i dont remember what made me wrote it

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