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Dark Poetry #5

Give a rose

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

0 posted 2009-10-25 04:35 PM

Heart pounding like a pendulum
Counting down to the last rhythm
Three, two, one
Thump, thump, thump

My dear friends
Hold me as it all ends
It’s just life it’s not fair
Share, share, share

Keep me close
Give a rose
Give a tear
Keep me near

loveyourself102
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since 2009-10-11

Posts 48

1 posted 2009-10-25 10:07 PM

this was beautifull.

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2009-10-25 11:20 PM

thank you

wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10

Posts 93

3 posted 2009-11-12 10:40 PM

wow

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2009-11-12 10:49 PM

Whoa...I'm flabbergasted at the brilliance of this poem.

Library most definitely.

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23

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5 posted 2009-11-20 03:01 PM

short pretty and sweet.

Stitches
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since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

6 posted 2009-11-28 05:57 PM

Gorgeous.

Really, truly lovely and very unique.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

7 posted 2009-12-01 07:06 PM

thank you...

Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05

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minnasota

8 posted 2009-12-02 02:16 PM

nice use of words. very articulate.i enjoyed it.

Stitches
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since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

9 posted 2009-12-11 06:54 AM

I find much poetry that does not rhyme or that is less structures aimless...

This was not aimless, everything fitted.

I loved it.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

10 posted 2009-12-13 04:20 PM

thank you very much

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