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I had a friend...
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
I had a friend... They say suicide is the ultimate act of a coward The idea became a seed, and then it flowered It was then I realized, perhaps I disagree Think outside the box, stir up some controversy You see some die because they're afraid to live Others live because they're afraid to die and give Double edged sword, a definition of hypocrisy From those whose life is nothing but ecstasy Don't get it twisted, his decision I can't defend But I had his back from day one, his best friend He said nobody knew what it was like to walk his shoes A constant battle with hatred, The one with a short fuse Told him, Instead of giving in, slowly letting yourself die Do what you always wanted, but were afraid to try Told him, if youre that desperate, try something new Go somewhere, start from scratch with options to pursue Life is full of different paths and journies to take I encourage you to rethink, this road is surely a mistake Told him, no one lacks a reason to imagine their own demise You must keep hope and keep looking to the next sunrise Then i received a call, telling me he had gone home Left us nothing but a note, then put two in his dome A feeling I hope no one goes through, but those who know It brings worlds crashing down, with tears in endless flow A funeral with a casket closed, is what they advised Told the family his body wasn't going to be recognized Lonely can be the sadness when all is black and bleak Lonely is the peak of sadness too difficult to speak I had a friend... Who left me in 2002 I lost a friend...There was nothing I could do ** This one means alot too me.. if anyone has any comments about making it better, or smoother, please post. When you write about an event, it never seems like it's good enough to make you happy... |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Buddy. I know where your coming from yo. This is raw emotion man. This type of poetry/rhyme is best left running its course. It is perfect. No need to alter it. Kinda think of the track (Eminem - Kim) as an example. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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