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Thoughts of a pen
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Thoughts of a pen |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
Why can't I stop loving the girl who lies She had a disquise, and is everything I despise Why can't I stop chasing the girl i can't get Even though I know, can't bring myself to submit Dealing with this crappy hand I was delt Longing for a sense of love, I havn't yet felt Hatred builds up, i'm always tense too much I dont feel anymore, like I have no sense of touch Trapped in this place I hate, doomed just to linger I'll say it loud, as I raise my middle finger Or Let me explain via this little note Some harsh words, that I hope you all quote Forget you all, I hate this place i'll burn it down Forget my friends, forget my girl, Go die and drown If terrorists get a nuke, i hope they blow this town And put everything in it 6 feet under ground Mind was closed, the door locked up tight I found the key, it was nothing more than to write lost my voice, I need a pen to speak not my choice, but I find it unique I found how to escape in some rhythm and rhyme Whenever I needed, escape just a second at a time Love hurts, but it can be thrilling to feel As long as I have my pen, it'll be my way to heal [This message has been edited by Swisha (08-07-2009 11:10 PM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Well said. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
"Trapped in this place I hate, doomed just to linger I'll say it loud, as I raise my middle finger Or Let me explain via this little note Some harsh words, that I hope you all quote" Hahahaha I liked it. Yeah been I been giving my middle finger to a few "ladies"(Don't know if you can call the truly inept and stupid, ladies) But yeah man. I got a nice chuckle off that. "Mind was closed, the door locked up tight I found the key, it was nothing more than to write lost my voice, I need a pen to speak not my choice, but I find it unique I found how to escape in some rhythm and rhyme Whenever I needed, escape just a second at a time Love hurts, but it can be thrilling to feel As long as I have my pen, it'll be my way to heal" That was a nice closing Stanza buddy. Ayo, we should collaborate on a piece. |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
Thanks for all the feed def, yeah man i'm down to getin somethin together.. Hit me up with some ideas |
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