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th1nktw1ce
Junior Member
since 2009-07-13
Posts 24


0 posted 2009-07-13 06:42 AM


I should say...I'm posting this under a new sn because my old sn, thinktwice, is under an email addy no longer in existence. hurray. also this is my first post in a couple years.
When I was a younger man
I was the balanced example; true Fruedian
ego set in unconscious balance
Rebuking all demons to obey,
I was open to angels whispering wisdom
A testament to utopian innocence

When I was a younger man
I was the silenced example; true equestrian
Honor set in chivalrous talent
Playing his cello song for them,
the deaf, to angels’ whispered wisdom
It was my testament to unrequited love

I am a young man,
I am rebuked by demons to obey
This deafness to whispered wisdom
And the angels calling my name,
Like a lost boy
I am sickened by my own pride
So I’ll ride this drum to find
That little boy I left behind

© Copyright 2009 Adam - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2009-08-10 07:49 AM


Well, I for one am glad you returned to share your words. Really loved this piece.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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