Pain is just the beginning

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Dark Poetry #5

Pain is just the beginning

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2011-01-07 06:05 PM

The snap is audible
I fall forever
Into that pool of the light
Flash red
flash blue
flash green
And the colours fade

I lie in the warmth
Of only memories
wrapping around me
Softness begging me
let go, let me in
Allow me this one moment
and so all others

She seduces
With fine words
With soft form
With true freedom
With no regrets
Wine for the gasping man
Her promises are to me

So i open myself
even as she envelops
I give myself
As she takes me
And the beat subsides
and once more alone
I am lost

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

1 posted 2011-01-11 08:07 AM

quote:
Softness begging me
let go, let me in

I love these lines. Enjoyed.

-Trina
Be thankful for every person who has caused you pain. In that moment, they became your assistant of growth.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2011-01-31 03:38 AM

Paul, Enjoyed this poem quite a lot. how have you been? it has been ages and ages since we last talked!

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2011-02-05 01:50 AM

This is kinda cool. I get the sense the "she" here is some kind of feeling or phenomenon. I'd say death but... lost sounds a bit more like a continuing psychological state so the speaker's very much alive.

In any case, cool read.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

4 posted 2011-03-24 05:34 PM

This is good. Anyone can relate to these feelings.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

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